Sunday, 25 September 2011
Unknown
''I love you and I always will you never noticed when I had all them late nights hope you can forgive me some day jack x’’ I ran to the toilets and threw up again and again, when I was done I just sat there and cried how could i not have noticed I felt so sick. I eventually got up and went to the mirror and sorted myself out the letter still stuck to my side it felt like I had just opened Pandora’s box and me and my world were being sucked in.
I walked back to my office, sat in my chair and opened the letter again I noticed something different this time slightly yellow marks were on the bottom, what could they be? I thought about it for a few minutes then thought could it be a secret message? I went to the main desk and asked for a UV note checker and went back to my office and scanned the letter and I was surprised to see the words ‘body farm good luck’ he sold the body to a body farm and I thought what will be left
I decided to had the letter over to Detective Doyle I couldn’t handle having the letter anymore. I went back to my office and called Marcus and he said he would be there as soon as he could.
Detective Doyle came to me a few hours later and said ‘’he had called a few of the body farms and had a hit on University of Tennessee Anthropological research facility they said they can’t be sure but a while ago, a body turned up on the site that a few people hadn’t seen before but as they said bodies get moved around here all the time but they’ll get back to us.’’
I decided I better go home the state is was in I was no use here I put everything in my bag and just as I was leaving the phone went I dropped my bag and answered it, it was Texas State University-San Marcos Department of Anthropology they said they had received a report off a student and it described a body they had not registered but they would have to do more checks and they’d get back to me.
I went home it was strange Andy was looking for a job and Marcus was at work, I went upstairs got changed and went to make some food for when everyone got in and just as I was headed for the kitchen a letter came through the letter box on its own, I thought that’s strange, we had post earlier I went and picked it up it was addresses to me, who writing me letters?
I opened the letter and all it said was recognise anyone? In the envelope were surveillance pictures of Andy and jack one of them kissing dated when we were together and another one of them covered in blood and Andy holding knife and jack holding a gun. I dropped the pictures.
Later I went upstairs and got a magnifying glass and looked at them closely felling sicker and sicker the more I looked then I noticed just the bottom of a sign all I could make out was Anthropology centre. Andy helped Jack kill these people… then I thought did she help kill Callum?
I went for a walk with the photos in my pocket, I must of walked for about an hour then I got back and there was a cat sitting on my door step I walked up to it and said to it ‘’what you doing here?’’ I open the door to go in and the cat invited it’s self in. I went to the kitchen and found some chicken I had cooked for tea the other night I put it on a plate and gave it a bowl of milk and it tucked in I thought it must just be hungry but it finished that than sat on my knee so I check it for a collar and I felt for a microchip and nothing. It jumped down and walked over of my bag and pulled out my uneaten sandwich from work and brought it to me as if to say can I have it? This felt weird I opened the sandwich and held the piece of ham while it sat back on my knee and ate it, it finished the piece of ham and curled up on me and went to sleep. For the first time in hours I hadn’t thought about what happened today.
Thursday, 1 September 2011
Trouble.
We were in deep trouble Andy had my gun. I thought is it loaded? How much is in there? My train of thought was interrupted by the sound of the loader going back… but to our surprise it was empty. She could of killed us! I turned to Marcus who just looked at me like he wanted to rip the gun from her hand kill her his self then he said to me ‘’I told you she was a handful, I’m sorry’’ After everything calmed down and we all sobered up we decided to go to bed. I needed sleep I looked like a cross between myself and a zombie.
I thought a lot about the future that night. I woke to my alarm the radio person said ‘’top headline, police run riot as super intendant is on where to be found.’’ I thought I know where I am? I’ve been at home and the hospital? But what bothered me the most was what were my police doing to run riot?! I decide to screw sick leave I was going back today! I can walk and talk to I’ll be fine. Marcus was still asleep when I was getting ready to leave he had taken a week’s leave for ‘family business,’ I packed my bag I tip toed around my room getting everything I need I got to the door. I looked at the list on the door, at the top was a little package and a little note that said:
I know you will go back to work without me knowing so, just so you don’t forget anything have you got your: gun, ammunition, ID, badge, pain killers, phone, radio, belt and purse?
Don’t do anything stupid,
Love Marcus
P.S. one of the cleaners is allergic to pollen so to I put some in a little bag for you.
I found a post it note and wrote:
Gone to work,
Love you lots, take care of your sister!
I locked the door and got in my car and drove to work. It was still early when I got out the car, I swung the door open and stepped out a cold breeze hit me like a glass wall, it was still dark. I walked in to work and up to my office it was still as I remembered it black and shiny! Just as I was about to open my bag on pour the pollen down the back book case Detective Jones came in and just said ‘’Jack is refusing to say anything until he can talk to you, I know you shouldn’t be involved and everything but he said he will tell us where one of the bodies is if you talk to him’’ i felt all powerful like I held the key to a million dollars when Detective Jones said ‘’please were begging you, were running out of time.’’ I thought for a moment. ‘’yes I’ll talk to him where is he?’’ I said, so Detective Jones drove me up to where Jack was being held, on the way he said where is that rookie you had driving you about I nearly very nearly said he’s at my house but I thought no you can’t say that I just said ‘’back with is training officer I think.’’
We walked in to this smelly place it stunk of urine and rooting flesh I felt a shiver up my spine as I as escorted to where jack was being held. I walked in to the room and Jack was sitting their he just said ‘’ I love you and under the red sculpture in Millennium park’’ I turned to Detective Jones and just said can I leave now?’’ he just said ‘’it’s up to you’’ Jack handed me this letter as I was leaving.
Should I talk to him or not? I thought then I thought he nearly killed me so I decided that was it no I never wanted to see him again or did i? I went back to the office, sat down and peeled the flap of the letter inch by inch I was desperate to see what it said.
Saturday, 16 July 2011
Name the Rookie! Give Away!
the boring bit the rules:
1. 1 entry per person please comment on this post to enter.
2. I will use the random number generator at random.org to pick the winner and if that person could email me with in seven days with their name and a address, so they can get there prize.
3. this give away is open to international readers.
4. I will announce the winner in a separate post on the 28th of July 2011 just before the next part goes up.
So for your chance to win a M Journal by staples (picture below) and name the Rookie comment below!

Thursday, 30 June 2011
Silence
I am dyslexic so give me break please, i have never wrote a story before so please give it a read and tell me what you think, and yes if anyone makes the connection this is based very loosely on the Chicago code. I know it is very badly puncuated sorry!
Silence
Silence, was all I heard the moment I woke up. The peacefulness of the silence was comforting, I wanted to absorb every minute of it I could. As today was my first day as super intendant, the first female super intendant in Chicago.
I was eventually ready to leave, I left the house turned the key in the door, then suddenly i had that feeling t when you forget something, I brushed it off telling myself it’s just nerves. I got to my car pressed the ‘open’ button on the keys then I remembered my gun! How could I forget my gun? Which cop forgets their gun? Then I thought I’m the new super intendant of Chicago how to day goes it up to me.
I got my gun from the bottom of my sock draw, then got my amumision from my bed side table then checked I still had my car keys and put everything in my bag. Then I steddyed myself, walked down stairs closed the door behind me, checked it was locked then walked to my car. I got in my car switched my radio on to 101.9 FM, it was at this moment when the radio said ‘’top head line body found in garbage bin’’ it was at this moment I decided I would do my first check in.
I rang through to control to ask for the details as the person picked up the phone they said '‘good morning super intendant'' I had never really seemed real until this point. I got the details put them in to the satnav and drove, I was doing better today only 23 people were in my opinion slipping through net and could have been arrested on the 40 minute drive to the crime scene which I didn’t know the name of as I am still getting used to Chicago, having never lived here before.
I arrived at the crime scene it was too sunny for me so down when my shades. I got out my car took the gun from my bag once I found it and placed it in my holder. I felt it click in to the holder it felt like everyone could hear it because at that moment everyone looked round, it felt like I was on a dark stage and the spot light had just been placed on me.
I walked over to the body that had been wrapped in bin bags and sealed with sliver tape, not the most common way to dispose of a body I thought. I looked at the face it hit me then that Callum hadn’t been home in a few days I asked if they had an ID for the john doe and then at that moment my world came crashing down in front of me as senor deceive Jones said the word that were like a fatal blow to my heart ‘’yes the john doe is Callum Doyal.’’ At this stage I didn’t know what to do apart from say Cullum’s name over and over again in my head, nobody knew we were together.