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Thursday, 17 November 2011

Andy...

I haven't posted in what feels like years and i'm very sorry so here's part 8

I sat on the sofa for a while, I must have fallen asleep because the next thing I knew Marcus came through the door and woke me and the cat up. ‘’what time is it?’’ I said tired and frustrated, I rubbed my eyes to see Marcus stood in front of me, he replied ‘’6 at night.’’ My next thought was Andy where was Andy?! I said to Marcus ‘’where is Andy?’’ he replied ‘’why?’’ he sounded scared and alarmed, I said ‘’no reason I just want to speak with her.’’ He sat down next to me and started playing with the cat then said ‘’when did we get a cat?’’ like he just realised I just replied ‘’today he found us.’’

The phone rang so I got up and answered it the first thing I heard was detective jones say is ‘’are you alone? We know about you and Marcus and his sister staying with you we know all this are you alone?’’ I froze they knew? How did they know? ‘’Marcus is with me,’’ ‘’go to another room away from him this is urgent’’ I walked up to my room I told Marcus I would be back in a few minutes and that is was my mam asking if I had her bracelet from dad. I got in my room and said to detective jones I was alone and he said ‘’Andy his sister right?’’ ‘’Yea ‘’ I said ‘’her finger prints are on the letter you gave us’’ I just said ‘’I’m gunna come down, I have been given something that might help’’

I grabbed a random bracelet and went down stairs Marcus looked at me I couldn’t tell him he would die inside he loved her should I tell him? Show him the letter? The pictures? Would he believe me? I just said found it I’m gunna go post it, I’ll be back soon.

I drove as fast as I could, when I got there detective jones was waiting for me we walked into my office and there must have been about 20 Federal agents and FBI in my office. They wanted to ask questions about Andy and Jack then I gave them the pictures and they said I was to be watched at all times and all walked out.

About 2 hours later they came back and said I would ring Andy and get her to meet me. This all felt wrong Marcus knew everything and I couldn’t tell him anything. I rang Andy and asked her to meet me at a coffee shop nearby in an hour.

I spent 45 minutes getting kitted out and going through all the signals they wanted me to use, then I walked to the coffee shop and sat down and waited for what seemed like ever, she came through the door and sat down and said she had something to tell me. I told everyone to back off by twisting my mug so the handle was pointing to the window. She started crying then she said ‘’you must hate me, I should be dead I killed Cullum and helped with the others, I’m so sorry please forgive me I love staying with you.’’ I looked at her she was clearly sorry and there was nothing I could do I just spilt the half cup of coffee and coffee shop filled with agents and she was arrested. I actually felt sorry for her. Then it occurred to me how did she know I knew?

Saturday, 16 July 2011

Name the Rookie! Give Away!

I hope you all have been enjoying the story but I have a problem, as everyone knows the Rookie has no name, so i have decide to enlist you help! I need a first name and a second name.
the boring bit the rules:
1. 1 entry per person please comment on this post to enter.
2. I will use the random number generator at random.org to pick the winner and if that person could email me with in seven days with their name and a address, so they can get there prize.
3. this give away is open to international readers.
4. I will announce the winner in a separate post on the 28th of July 2011 just before the next part goes up.

So for your chance to win a M Journal by staples (picture below) and name the Rookie comment below!