tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post3409995989800787944..comments2023-03-24T04:35:55.813-07:00Comments on SkiAndBoots: SilenceBeckahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comBlogger37125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-71097686799403288242011-11-25T01:59:48.801-08:002011-11-25T01:59:48.801-08:00thanks glad you liked it! yea i have written some ...thanks glad you liked it! yea i have written some more if you go to the top of the page and click on my headder then they will all come up but to get the next part if click the headder and then if you click on July on the side they should come up the next part is called Trapped it's at the bottom of July <br />hope you enjoy them!Beckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-88614492457344920172011-11-22T13:50:13.474-08:002011-11-22T13:50:13.474-08:00I just ran across this site and read the first par...I just ran across this site and read the first part of your story. Have you written more parts yet? This is really good and cannot wait to read the rest.Heynewgirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17995313744807882435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-40324308154310956942011-07-09T09:29:15.595-07:002011-07-09T09:29:15.595-07:00thankyou for the support! everyone at #FridayFlash...thankyou for the support! everyone at #FridayFlash has been really good with it you's are all a very surportive bunch! if you know FutureNostalgic he has said he will be my proof reader and 'sorter outer' for the next few.Beckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-60681365338358635032011-07-09T08:47:49.396-07:002011-07-09T08:47:49.396-07:00Welcome to #FridayFlash Beckah! It takes a lot of ...Welcome to #FridayFlash Beckah! It takes a lot of guts to put your work out there for others to read. Congrats on taking that step. Like Mazz said above, we all make constant mistakes in our writing, be it skipping words, repeating a word, poor punctuation, whatever. The best thing you can do as a writer is find a critique partner who will proofread your stories before you post. Everyone one of mine is read by at least one person before I post. It's a lifesaver! <br /><br />Good luck with your writing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-83093249392811439782011-07-06T11:20:01.307-07:002011-07-06T11:20:01.307-07:00hehe thankyou! she is really very easy to write as...hehe thankyou! she is really very easy to write as a character and the story is just easy to write. glad you liked it and i hope you like the next parts!Beckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-28669351169661539792011-07-06T08:41:09.560-07:002011-07-06T08:41:09.560-07:00Nicely done. I enjoyed the moment she remembers he...Nicely done. I enjoyed the moment she remembers her gun and her trudge back to retrieve it. Seeing her self-consciousness gave her depth for me. A belated welcome to #FridayFlash!<br /><br />Take care,<br />JCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-32169720520927139452011-07-06T06:00:58.232-07:002011-07-06T06:00:58.232-07:00thankyou! hope you like the next few parts too!thankyou! hope you like the next few parts too!Beckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-39468713488059760152011-07-05T15:21:27.079-07:002011-07-05T15:21:27.079-07:00Glad you made it to Friday Flash! You're off t...Glad you made it to Friday Flash! You're off to a flying start.Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-77815481907574529132011-07-04T08:37:22.680-07:002011-07-04T08:37:22.680-07:00Chuck- thanks glad you liked it
Aidan- thanks it g...Chuck- thanks glad you liked it<br />Aidan- thanks it gets a bit more mis-matched in te next few because i think of it and it gets wrote or the chacater goes off on a tagent lolBeckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-2190249451895014992011-07-04T08:28:17.930-07:002011-07-04T08:28:17.930-07:00Intriguing. This captures a little bit of the mis-...Intriguing. This captures a little bit of the mis-matched expectations of the first day of a job.AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-6598224865342257692011-07-03T22:02:14.004-07:002011-07-03T22:02:14.004-07:00That's a pretty tough first day. I can't w...That's a pretty tough first day. I can't wait to see where this is going. Welcome to FridayFlash!Chuck Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14094196458632858993noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-88833329659571493432011-07-03T09:37:12.352-07:002011-07-03T09:37:12.352-07:00Thankyou!Thankyou!Beckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-28250367349536224982011-07-02T15:54:52.408-07:002011-07-02T15:54:52.408-07:00Good Job and welcome to fridayflash! :)Good Job and welcome to fridayflash! :)Marihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07303695124956391293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-39573424005076171042011-07-02T08:21:02.079-07:002011-07-02T08:21:02.079-07:00aww thankyou!
good for you! i bet yout first stori...aww thankyou!<br />good for you! i bet yout first stories were good!Beckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-24779802929532029522011-07-02T07:37:40.579-07:002011-07-02T07:37:40.579-07:00Well done. And don't let dyslexia hold you bac...Well done. And don't let dyslexia hold you back, you can do anything. I got a degree in physics with an odd little trait of reading numbers backwards, so you could be a writer if you want to.<br /><br />BTW, this is much better than a lot of my first stories. Well done and keep it up!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16518183823230864763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-79969655006394468902011-07-02T05:13:51.113-07:002011-07-02T05:13:51.113-07:00thank you for the lovely coment!thank you for the lovely coment!Beckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-57337308394406947232011-07-02T04:46:51.297-07:002011-07-02T04:46:51.297-07:00You did a wonderful job, Beckah, I really enjoyed ...You did a wonderful job, Beckah, I really enjoyed the story!<br /><br />I tutor a couple of kids, and one of them has ADHD. The sad thing is he lets that characterize him, when in fact there's no reason for that to happen. It's harder than for others, but the way I see it, giving up (especially at such a young age) is not an option.<br />It's so wonderful to see you not let dyslexia get in the way of what you want to say! <br />Welcome to #fridayflash :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-83485476779187671322011-07-02T01:38:31.623-07:002011-07-02T01:38:31.623-07:00thanks! it means alot for yous to read it! glad yo...thanks! it means alot for yous to read it! glad you liked it! so far i have wrote the next two parts :)Beckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-57698556098019060742011-07-01T20:22:59.559-07:002011-07-01T20:22:59.559-07:00Well done Beckan - I don't know what the Chica...Well done Beckan - I don't know what the Chicago code is being an Australian, but I did enjoy your story. Oh I felt so sorry for the <br />superintendant and the poor boy Callum.<br /><br /><br />I look forward to reading more of your Friday Flash :)<br /><br />Helen from helen-scribbles.comHelen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-48796001046019696142011-07-01T13:43:06.159-07:002011-07-01T13:43:06.159-07:00Wow, that's a tough first day on the job. I ho...Wow, that's a tough first day on the job. I hope she brings the perps to justice.<br /><br />Welcome to #FridayFlash.<br />~jonJ. M. Strotherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01117770768990691070noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-21638259929482450862011-07-01T08:51:22.996-07:002011-07-01T08:51:22.996-07:00thanks for the support!thanks for the support!Beckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-36635171299164733212011-07-01T08:34:55.432-07:002011-07-01T08:34:55.432-07:00Great story Beckah! Don't let the dyslexia bo...Great story Beckah! Don't let the dyslexia bother you, I have that and a couple other 'learning disabilities' too. Makes it harder sometimes, but the end result is worth it!Anthony Deaverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09746700165087364279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-82508063621654031212011-07-01T08:16:17.187-07:002011-07-01T08:16:17.187-07:00thanks alot really do apperchieat you reading it!
...thanks alot really do apperchieat you reading it!<br /><br />her personionality comes out more in the next bit but then it's back to feel sorry for in part 3 and i bit of a spoiler callum is not the end of her lovelife...Beckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-90644079642385335092011-07-01T08:07:38.381-07:002011-07-01T08:07:38.381-07:00Welcome to #FridayFlash Beckah!
Poor Callum, and p...Welcome to #FridayFlash Beckah!<br />Poor Callum, and poor super intendant - what a first day on the job.<br /><br />Hats off to you for not letting dyslexia get in the way of story-telling! And as for punctuation and over-using the odd word, every single writer, dyslexic or not, will struggle with that sort of thing, I speak from experience :-)mazzz_in_Leedshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01498100483681096442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-85922892909133003732011-07-01T05:45:15.190-07:002011-07-01T05:45:15.190-07:00eeeee thankyou!eeeee thankyou!Beckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.com