tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post1463651401995952660..comments2023-03-24T04:35:55.813-07:00Comments on SkiAndBoots: Trapped.Beckahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-72955737100912876832011-07-09T09:24:25.732-07:002011-07-09T09:24:25.732-07:00musten.....tell....next....parts.....secrets!
but...musten.....tell....next....parts.....secrets! <br />but don't worry you find out soon as they say all will be revieled! glad you like it thanks for reading it!Beckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-49142256764815969672011-07-09T09:13:00.190-07:002011-07-09T09:13:00.190-07:00I like to see the nice way she treats the rookie (...I like to see the nice way she treats the rookie (I wish all bosses could be like that) but who is this ex and why is he covered in blood? We must know!Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-37344722100204259002011-07-09T09:11:31.403-07:002011-07-09T09:11:31.403-07:00thanks glad you are liking them! hope you like the...thanks glad you are liking them! hope you like the next lot too! there's a lot more to come and a new character on the way soon too!Beckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-18509949454982467992011-07-09T09:03:36.207-07:002011-07-09T09:03:36.207-07:00Great job with the story line, Beckah. You've ...Great job with the story line, Beckah. You've built up a lot of suspense and introduced some interesting characters. I can't wait to read more.Chuck Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14094196458632858993noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-83450177165454757232011-07-09T02:43:10.365-07:002011-07-09T02:43:10.365-07:00Very good Beckah, you've left yourself a nice ...Very good Beckah, you've left yourself a nice opening for the next part. :)<br /><br /><br />Helen from helen-scribbles.comHelen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-66765657709041741542011-07-08T10:52:56.108-07:002011-07-08T10:52:56.108-07:00thanks i hadn't noticed that! yea it reads rou...thanks i hadn't noticed that! yea it reads rough for the next few i think Future Nostalgic is going to help with the editing lolBeckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-87702605673809451132011-07-08T09:22:55.982-07:002011-07-08T09:22:55.982-07:00I liked the story but it reads a little rough. And...I liked the story but it reads a little rough. And in the second paragraph you use the word "expectorations" and I think you might have meant "expectations," unless it was meant to be funny...<br /><br />As a final way of editing, try closing the door and reading it out loud to yourself. This tip works. Thanks for the story, and keep writing!Donald Conradhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11299995538611948494noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-41460409303275924202011-07-08T08:47:27.669-07:002011-07-08T08:47:27.669-07:00hehe i'm glad you like it i have the 3 parts w...hehe i'm glad you like it i have the 3 parts written so far glad you are getting into it!Beckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-62618316802473928732011-07-08T08:35:09.876-07:002011-07-08T08:35:09.876-07:00Great job Beckah, love how this is proceeding. Ca...Great job Beckah, love how this is proceeding. Can't wait for the next episode!Anthony Deaverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09746700165087364279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-56720033314872152972011-07-08T08:11:14.498-07:002011-07-08T08:11:14.498-07:00thanks glad you liked it!thanks glad you liked it!Beckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-90004042770140730062011-07-08T05:24:48.136-07:002011-07-08T05:24:48.136-07:00Very good, Beckah. Love your style :)Very good, Beckah. Love your style :)Ian Ayrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02938603752420100222noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-27003191366604406852011-07-07T13:12:42.552-07:002011-07-07T13:12:42.552-07:00thankyou!thankyou!Beckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-69533031821053895882011-07-07T08:58:13.636-07:002011-07-07T08:58:13.636-07:00all will be Reviled soon i promise! glad you liked...all will be Reviled soon i promise! glad you liked it!Beckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-41840478589110824112011-07-07T08:54:34.930-07:002011-07-07T08:54:34.930-07:00Nice suspenseful way to end it! Now I need to know...Nice suspenseful way to end it! Now I need to know who her ex killed...and if there's something romantic with the rookie. I like how they have the same quirk about numbers.Joz Varlohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12750541029227514781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-54488393641917324162011-07-07T08:06:56.613-07:002011-07-07T08:06:56.613-07:00hehe thankyou!hehe thankyou!Beckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08423299433443572191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1754795154743670484.post-22383933664829595932011-07-07T08:03:29.341-07:002011-07-07T08:03:29.341-07:00Smashing, Beckah, great ending. Sets the next part...Smashing, Beckah, great ending. Sets the next part up nicely - good work!Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14581854897484618741noreply@blogger.com